Monday, August 15, 2011
Good story book title?
Your story has not taken shape yet. You have several things going on in your story. First you have the Help Agency which does not sound like it is much fun and there seems to be more to it then you have told the reader. Secondly, you have the interaction between the main character and Callie. Third, from your description of the feeling about eating you almost expect that there may be something wrong with the food. Finally, you have Janelle the princess. This seems to come from left field. It needs to be tied to the other, is it a dream or is the dream the reality. I cannot tell where you are heading.
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